Writing for Radio
The Enlightener Body Soap Commercial
"The Enlightener"
WISE BUDDHA MAN 1: (Soothing voice) You shall find peace
when you’re in a peaceful state within yourself.
WOMAN 1: But how do I find peace
within? Between work, the kids,
keeping up with the house—the only time I have a moment to myself to relax is
in the shower.
WISE BUDDHA MAN 1: (Soothing voice) Take advantage of the
time you do have. Here, this will help you with the answers you seek.
SFX: Glowing noise
WOMAN 1: The Enlightener body soap.
(sighs) the smell is so serene.
WISE BUDDHA MAN 1: Yes, and it will
calm your senses and open your mind. Its new anti-deodorant feature soaks into
your skin and brings it to a long-lasting, peaceful glow. Now go, be one with
yourself…and one with the soap.
ANNOUNCER: Enlighten your senses; enlighten
you skin—The Enlightener, lush and powerful body soap.
I felt relatable to the WOMAN character, as everyone needs time to relax. The BUDDHA MAN was very realistic in this type of commercial as well!
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