Brian Woodworth
“Camel Clean” – Commercial
Time (:60)
SFX: Music is playing of a Arabian
sound. The sound of brushes scrubbing a floor.
Man 1: You’d think they’d give us
more to work with than this little dinky thing.
Man 2: That’s part of our punishment.
Man 1: Oh yeah… I could think of a
million different things these could be used for rather than this!
Man 2: Like…?
Man 1: Uh…. Um… Well, what about
cleaning teeth?
Man 2: Really?
Man 1: Yeah! We’d call them
toothbrushes!
SFX: Noises like you’re headed into
the future.
Guard 1: What?
Guard 2: Huh?
Guard 3: What is it?
SFX: All of the guards laughing.
King: Let him through!
SFX: Laughing suddenly stops and a
big loud thud of armor, like a parting of the guards to let him through.
King: What do you have there son?
Man 1: I call it a toothbrush!
SFX: Guards begin to howl with
laughter again.
King: SILENCE! Hmmm… A tooth…
brush… Made of camel hair...? I LOVE IT!
SFX: Party music! Celebrating
people!
Man 2: Marion… Marion! Marion!!!
Man 1: Huh? (snapping out of it)
Man 2: You’re ridiculous… Get back
to work.
Announcer: New Camel Clean
Toothbrushes: Works harder than a camel's back. Available wherever toothbrushes are sold.
I really like the humor in your commercial. I wonder if maybe the contents of the toothbrush could somehow be incorporated to enhance its appeal-for example, its way of protecting enamel and whatnot. Good job!
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